Final Argumentative essay reflection

Aaron Batista 3/23/2018

I had realized in class that I had structured my argument in the completely opposite way than I should have. I chose the pro position for my topic and yet placed my counter arguments first which places the wrong idea in the reader’s mind. I had to change the way the arguments appeared in order to better support my position. By doing so I had to correct the way the rest of it flowed so there wouldn’t be any abrupt changes in the transition of the paragraphs. The structure of the paper was easy enough to revise as well as a few other grammatical errors throughout the paper. Overall I think its structured in a way that will better support my argument.

I had at first neglected  to mention the effects that lethal injection had on the organs on the inmate but came across two situations that ended up negating each other. Currently lethal injection attacks the heart in order to shut it down which then causes death to the rest of the body. However since pharmaceutical companies no longer want to provide drugs that will be used for killing inmates, this process is starting to get phased out. So while the effects of lethal injection are something to mention they are not worth dwelling on.